Friday, December 11, 2009

I am A Poem



What are your thoughts on this poem and presentation?

What makes it high quality?

What could be improved?

24 comments:

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Dominince said...

i like this song.It makes me sad and good at the same time.awesome Mr.Kilby

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Dylan said...

Those are realy cool pictures in the movie

Robert said...

i am not a big fan of it and it needs more details

Dylan said...

Who is Mr Kibly

Dylan said...

Im not a big faaaaan

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Rya:b said...

I like the music in it and the way athuor discrib it.

Elijah said...

I like this video by Mr Kilby. If I meet him i would ask him can I watch him make this video. His like an artist.I like the motion pictures because what ever the text says the meaning pops up.

Anonymous said...

I thought that this poem/movie was really good and so was the song. But one thing this person needs to do is edit the picture because the words are going off each picture. Also the presentation was awsome.

Alyssa said...

I like this poetry i is really a great poetry.It just needs more deatails.The back ground was a great background.anthor thing was i liked how the words came on the page.And would like to see MR.GILBY.

Juan said...

I don't really know if I like it because i did not understand the message, i also dont like the song

Lilianna said...

I like this poem because it had a nice background.I also liked how the words appeared on the page.Another thing I liked was all the colors.

Zackery said...

this poem was good and had great music and a great vidio

Anonymous said...

My thoughts were that I liked the poem.Bu it needed to be more creative.The presentatation was good but Mr.Gilby could of put more feelings and words to discribe the poem.So other readers would know wat the poems about.

Donald said...

I think the poem is cool. What I love the most is the song. What I think can improve is the words and the pictures. It felt to me that it was just being lazy.

Alyssa said...

i like this poem because it makes me feel like i am in the forest. I would like the details to improve more. mr.giblyshould put this on yahoo.

Dylan said...

I think that their should be more picutures

Dylan said...

I think the music makes this poem a high quality poem

Anonymous said...

I like the song.I think ther was a message but I don't know what it is.Mr.Kilby love poem.